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揭开雅思写作流程图的奥秘

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  各位烤鸭们好,时间过的飞快,眨眼间2016就剩下一点小尾巴了。回顾今年的考试,我们会惊讶地发现流程图和地图题的考试频率和去年相比低了很多。根据平衡的原则,不排除会在年末出现流程图和地图题。所以,在今天的作文推送中,老师就带大家来分析一篇最近考的流程图。帮助大家揭开其神秘的面纱。
  题目
  The diagrams below show the amount of energy lost in 100 units when it is generated from black coal and when it is generated from brown coal.

揭开雅思写作流程图的奥秘

  题目分析
  相信很多烤鸭在拿到这到题目的时候肯定是大脑一片空白的。简单的几个箭头构成的两幅流程图,过程都一模一样,居然要写满150个单词。实际上,这幅流程图的意思并不难理解,讲解的是不同种类的煤矿在发电厂,运输和分配中的能源消耗情况,以及最后到消费者中的手中剩余的能源情况。虽然过程简单,但是题目中出现了很多数据,这提醒烤鸭们一定要有定量的分析,也在一定程度上降低了字数达标的要求。
  Word count: 196
  The two diagrams present the information of energy loss in every 100 units fuel energy , from black coal and brown coal respectively.
  分析:对题目进行简单的同义改写。开头段保持精简的原则。不要进行过多的句型转化。
  It can be seen from the first diagram that in the first stage where the brown coal is sent to the power station, there are 70 units energy wasted, accounting for a large proportion of the whole energy. In the following stage, transportation and distribution, a relatively marginal amount of energy is lost ( 3 units), and the remainder is only 27 units when it is consumed by the consumers in the final step.
  分析:分析棕煤在运输的过程中能源的消耗和变化情况。注意不同步骤之间的衔接手段的多样性。题目中的in the following stage, in the final step都体现出了步骤。同时也要注意句型表达的多样性。第一句话中用到了定语从句,there be句型和非谓语动词,句型很丰富。
  The black coal, on the other hand, shows a similar energy loss pattern compared with its brown counterpart. When it is transported, the energy loss amounts to 68 units, which means more than half of its original energy is lost. In the stage of transportation and distribution, the same quantity of energy is wasted in comparison to the brown coal. The consumers, who will finally utilize the energy, can only share a small proportion of fuel energy.
  分析: 这段话和上一段的思维逻辑是一模一样的,就是按照步骤顺序进行描述,同时要注意数据的分析。最后,在句式上要注意多多变化。比如,这一段的一开始通过一个插入语的方式将一个长句子变成一个短句子,在节奏上听起来更加朗朗上口。
  Overall, the black coal loses less energy than the brown coal and the second stage will cost most of the fuel energy.
  分析:最后一段进行总体对比,得出在整个过程中黑煤的能源消耗更少。
  结语
  经过简单的分析,相信烤鸭们对流程图应该没有很大的畏难情绪了。只要平时在战略上不忽视,然后在战术上多多练习,肯定会跨过这道坎。

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